tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4047870761755890657.post44723874974294974..comments2014-10-18T14:14:32.629-07:00Comments on Just My Imagination Running Away With Me: Peaceful Beats of Music for Peace VibrationTavostonedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07480158850530107016noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4047870761755890657.post-59096401877484353742014-10-18T14:14:32.629-07:002014-10-18T14:14:32.629-07:00Good job! Pay attention to LENGTH of paragraphs: s...Good job! Pay attention to LENGTH of paragraphs: some look rather short (e.g.Par.2: 2 sentences: one Topic Sent. & the 2nd one Supp. Material).<br />I can see that you ARE IMPROVING (a lot!!)<br /><br />stella ;-)stellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05928284548419507933noreply@blogger.com